Fits rocs and conectiong to the grid

[Mankysteve]

Here a presentation I've started on Fits ROCs and connecting to my grid. I would like some creative criticism on how I can improve it any g;are mistakes/misunderstandings.
http://www.slideshare.net/manksteve/micro-generation-and-selling-your-power

Its meant to be quite simple not too simple.

[guydewdney]

initial comment - spelling mistakes - slide #2:-
nnational Grid should be National Grid
"Properly going to work" should be "Probably..."

slide 3
where does SO come from with regard to National Grid?

for there energy use - should be their energy use.


In the nicest way - get a dictionary...

[tony.]

Bs Standard 7671
 means

british standard standard 7671

tony

[Ted]

Lots of typos and grammar to fix.

On p14 you say "50kw to 50Mw"  this should be "50kW to 5MW"

[guydewdney]

Lots of typos and grammar to fix.

On p14 you say "50kw to 50Mw"  this should be "50kW to 5MW"

you got to page 14??? 

[wookey]

An awful lot of grammer/spelling/typos mistakes. Do you want us to go through and list them all or can you fix them yourself?

Also Strange use of German Capitals throughout.

The content looks good though. A useful bit to add is the process/ordering of connecting:

Get quote from PV installer -> Get planning permission -> Make sure you qualify (have done insulation etc) and, -> Apply for LCBP grant ->  Send to supplier, gets ROCS agent and Microgen forms from DNO -> Ask for MPAN number, Get schematic from PV installer -> Fill in forms -> Get install done -> Send off Forms -> Wait for MPAN allocation and then export meter fitting. (or something like that).

MPAN bit not needed if supplier provids generation-only tarrif (e.g. Good Energy).

[Mankysteve]

Its just a first rough draft done a machine with only welsh spelling pack. Coupled with my dyslexia. I can get someone to sort that for me I'm more interested in content wise.

[guydewdney]

OK - fair 'nuff - but really really need a decent native English speaker to triple check it.

Too complex. The "who pays who" schematic on page 4? was scary. You need consistency in naming people (National Grid not SO etc). And quite frankly - I don't care who pays who anyway, as long as I get my cheque...

Mozilla do http://www.seamonkey-project.org/ as a free web editor with spell checker.