I don't see how unpressurised heatstores can be sealed from atmosphere as theres bound to be thermal expansion and to ensure no air can get in, you would end up with a pressurised container, unless there was some kind of floating cover that fitted the store pretty well.
The oil slick seems like a neat idea though. Be interesting to see if it could subsume the current surface material.
Presumably any air that wanted to bubble out could get up through the oil layer if the bubble was big enough.
Is there any risk of the oil vaporising when the water its sitting on is around 70c ?
Is the entire sequence of chemistry triggered by oxygen in the water or is the problem more to do with steel and copper joined in series and sat in hot oxygenated water ?
The circulating water in the heat exchangers does have inhibitor added , just don't ask me what %age cos there have been too many 'release of liquid events' since the inhibitors were added.
With regard to trying to stop water penetrating the GRP layer, I wondered if I could hang sheets of bentonite matting. This stuff is used to form waterproof layers in landfill sites and for creating ponds. Once wet, the bentonite flakes swell up and seal the layer. Not easy to ensure good laps and coverage 2m deep though.
I think in the short term, to get through to a time when we do not need heating, based on the suggestions here, I will do the following -
Dose with NaOH to neutralise the pH, possibly with a slight bias to alkaline.
I will sample water from the bottom, middle and top of the store ( easy enough with a long pick up pipe on the Subaru fuel pump ) and see if there is a consistency in the chemistry or if there is a contamination gradient.
I will then mix equal amounts from the samples to get a 1 litre blended sample. I will carefully measure how much NaOH is required to raise the pH to 7.0 then multiply this by 1400. This amount will be mixed with warm water taken from the heatstore until it is all dissolved.
The NaOH solution will be injected at varying depths, using a funnel with a suitable length of pipe attached.
4 cans of Fernox inhibitor will be added to the above ( just seemed like a good number )
Try out oil slick air seal.
Don't think the antifreeze will bring much to the party unless its around 20% by volume and that's err ...
62 gallons ......
The water leaking into the insulation layers will be pumped out weekly, the water level topped up in the heatstore and the pH checked.
Any suggestions for sacrificial material to reduce electrolytic transfer from the heat exchangers

Probably an idea to run these additions past the GRP tekkies at
http://www.cfsnet.co.uk/ in case any of em will attack the resin.
Then review the situation in spring and consider options -
Rebuild the incoming heat exchanger using only copper ?

The radiators do a great job of transferring the heat and seem act as excellent stratifying baffles.
Recoat the GRP layer with bentonite matting ?
More GRP ?
2 Pack chemical resistant paint ?
As I recall, the tekkies I spoke to regarding using a made up butyl rubber liner said the rubber was ok to about 80c but the unavoidable joints would not take the heat.
Get a very expensive stainless steel tank built to fit the hole

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Get a really big heating oil tank and fill it while I can still afford to ?
